tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660764619120593708.post1010335523307648940..comments2023-09-29T05:42:23.751-07:00Comments on The Writing Center: a long lost poemS.Morganhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11006369937884305697noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660764619120593708.post-49467107887418315492008-05-09T17:41:00.000-07:002008-05-09T17:41:00.000-07:00Yeah, I was being an idiot. I did really enjoy the...Yeah, I was being an idiot. I did really enjoy the choice of words here. Simple but effective and powerful.Matthew R. Hall, Esq.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02997487835065202561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660764619120593708.post-55491623593235687182008-05-08T09:00:00.000-07:002008-05-08T09:00:00.000-07:00I liked this poem quite a bit. Simple, but very st...I liked this poem quite a bit. Simple, but very strong images and words. Nice workJulie Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03784598839917727248noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660764619120593708.post-26253657594364954212008-05-07T20:34:00.000-07:002008-05-07T20:34:00.000-07:00But . . . Matthew. Much better picture. I think. S...But . . . Matthew. Much better picture. I think. Sort of. But you kind of look you just sucked on a lemon.S.Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11006369937884305697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660764619120593708.post-76585720451216087182008-05-07T20:16:00.000-07:002008-05-07T20:16:00.000-07:00Nate, don't listen to Matthew. I think he's joking...Nate, don't listen to Matthew. I think he's joking or he's being an idiot. Nice, smashing, hard images.S.Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11006369937884305697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660764619120593708.post-39176167663777378122008-05-07T19:59:00.000-07:002008-05-07T19:59:00.000-07:00I like that it doesn't sound fakey. And I like the...I like that it doesn't sound fakey. And I like the pulse of the chains line. Don't know if I read it right, but I like what I read.Chanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16906940679027657843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660764619120593708.post-13864960053658970662008-05-07T15:27:00.000-07:002008-05-07T15:27:00.000-07:00Nathan, this isn't a poem. It doesn't rhyme. I'm s...Nathan, this isn't a poem. It doesn't rhyme. I'm sorry.<BR/><BR/>Seriously though, I really liked the last line. At least we, in the Church, know why we are broken down and shattered so frequently.Matthew R. Hall, Esq.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02997487835065202561noreply@blogger.com