tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660764619120593708.post8788234571452103932..comments2023-09-29T05:42:23.751-07:00Comments on The Writing Center: I finally finished my Blood Essay. It still needs some work, but tell me what you think.S.Morganhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11006369937884305697noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660764619120593708.post-40314586218930993132008-09-12T15:52:00.000-07:002008-09-12T15:52:00.000-07:00I think I agree with the most of all that has been...I think I agree with the most of all that has been said. I think the essay itself was done before I added the part about the bishop, which takes away from the meaning. I like my last line of the original essay. That line doesn't demand a conclusion, just another essay. (Mostly because there isn't a conclusion.) <BR/><BR/>To answer Sister Morgan, my essay with and about God will never be "done,Eric Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14115060973942185326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660764619120593708.post-29776097570113765442008-09-12T13:13:00.000-07:002008-09-12T13:13:00.000-07:00i don't know how to edit my comment, but when i sa...i don't know how to edit my comment, but when i said matt, i ment chan...Rebeckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09543428371017444273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660764619120593708.post-57399666458029810462008-09-12T13:11:00.000-07:002008-09-12T13:11:00.000-07:00i think it's totally apropriate to hope that there...i think it's totally apropriate to hope that there is a god. i think that many may say that they "know" that there is one simply because "know" is the terminology that they've heard used to describe a testimony. there are other catch phrases and words that we use too: obedience, charity, humility, etc... i admit to using them daily without knowing what they mean. for you to say that you hope Rebeckahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09543428371017444273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660764619120593708.post-87060966531827424142008-09-08T22:11:00.000-07:002008-09-08T22:11:00.000-07:00Umm, the bit with the Bishop feels (to me) like it...Umm, the bit with the Bishop feels (to me) like it's on a lower level than the rest of it. And, like Sister Morgan, by the end I don't know what the focus is: people? God? lousy advice? roast pig?Chanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16906940679027657843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660764619120593708.post-80029624563980637512008-09-07T21:59:00.000-07:002008-09-07T21:59:00.000-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660764619120593708.post-33218224951381738862008-09-05T12:20:00.000-07:002008-09-05T12:20:00.000-07:00Not finished. Answer me this question (seriously, ...Not finished. Answer me this question (seriously, and I'm not thinking of an answer I want from you. I'm interested in what you think). How can you finish the essay? Is there a "finish"? If your main conflict in the essay is between you and people, it's a pretty good finish. If the main conflict is between you and God, which is what I, at first, thought, but maybe I'm wrong, then it's NOT near S.Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11006369937884305697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7660764619120593708.post-77671749685259705322008-09-05T12:13:00.000-07:002008-09-05T12:13:00.000-07:00well, It's honest. And that is the scariest and mo...well, It's honest. And that is the scariest and most essential part of writing.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11236607700772283690noreply@blogger.com